Question

15．假如你是韓梅，下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發(fā)來的e-mail，請根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容，給他寫一封回信．與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難．
提示詞語：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，get along with，
smile

Dear Han Mei， I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently．My mother talks too much to me．She always tells me，"Be careful while crossing the street．""Put on more clothes．""Did you do a good job at school？"and so on．I'm annoyed（煩惱）．What shall I do？Can you give me some ideas？ Alice

Dear Alice，
                 ．
                                                               Han Mei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．
句中"If your mother doesn't take your advice"為"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，句中涉及的短語有"take one's advice 采納某人的建議"．這句話意為：如果你媽媽不采納你的建議，只需要保持沉默并且給她微笑．
高分句型二：
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．
句中"what I say here can help you a lot"為賓語從句，其中賓語從句中"what I say here"為主語從句，在從句中做主語．這句話意為：我希望我在這兒說的話可以幫助你．

解答 Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．Maybe it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you're thinking about．If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．【高分句型一】（提出建議）
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．【高分句型二】（表達(dá)祝福）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Han Mei

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