Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

我們的生活是豐富多彩的，美好的生活一定需要很多東西。請以“Our life needs___”

為題，用英語寫一篇英語。

要求：

1.請補全標(biāo)題，（空格處可以是單詞、短語，也可以是從句）；

2.詞數(shù)80左右

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Answer 1

【答案】

Our Life Needs Music

Our life needs music. Life without music is like a cold winter without sunshine.

Music makes our life colorful .It plays a very important part in our life. When we are under too much pressure, it can make us relaxed. When we’re excited, we can dance to music. When we’re sad, music can cheer us up. Music can also express our feelings about everything. Music is with us all the time. It brings us into a different world. We can not imagine the life without music.

Enjoy music. Enjoy our life.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如It plays a very important part in our life.等，When等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。