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李雷和他的同學要到圓山去春游。因為春天是爬山的最好時候。天氣好，即不會太冷也不會太熱。李雷和他的同學騎自行車去圓山，結果在路上，李雷拐錯了彎，發(fā)生了交通事故，傷到了右腿。所以說遵守交通規(guī)則對于我們來說非常重要。 我們平時必須遵守 交通規(guī)則。 1. 注意交通燈。紅燈停,綠燈行。  2.不要騎得太快，應該靠右邊行。3. 騎車要小心，戴頭盔。 4. 不能違反交通規(guī)則， 否則會被罰款。
We should obey the traffic rules
 
 
 
 

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We should obey the traffic rules
Li Lei and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Yuan for the spring field trip .Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine .It’s not too cold and not too hot .Li Lei and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Lei made a wrong turn, and a traffic accident happened. Li Lei’s right leg was hurt. (His classmates had to send him to the hospital.)So it’s very important for us to obey the traffic rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn’t ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third, we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffic rules, we’ll get a fine.

試題分析：根據(jù)題目要求可知本文主要以第一人稱書寫。在介紹春游及發(fā)生交通事故時要用一般過去時，但介紹交通規(guī)則時要用一般現(xiàn)在時，并使用情態(tài)動詞should。可以適當使用序數(shù)詞使得行文條理。
【亮點說明】本文作者使用序數(shù)詞逐條介紹交通規(guī)則，非常條理。