Question

11．英國懷特學(xué)校下學(xué)期組織學(xué)生來你校學(xué)習(xí)了解中國文化，請你以李明的身份給該校校長Mr．Green寫一封郵件，介紹你校的相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排及其理由．
要求：
1．介紹不少于兩個(gè)有關(guān)中國文化的活動(dòng)及安排理由；
2．詞數(shù)：80-120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
參考要點(diǎn)：
1．活動(dòng)計(jì)劃（打乒乓、包餃子…）
2．安排理由 （非常流行、帶來好運(yùn)…）
3．…．
Dear Mr．Green，
   I'm glad that you'll come to our school for a visit next term．Now I'll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．
Since Ping-Pong is popular inboth Britain and China，we arrange a Ping-Pong game for the students．They can learn from each other．What's more，they'll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students willwork togetherto make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings arenot onlya kind of delicious foodbut alsoa symbol of good luck．I think they willenjoy their timehere
   I'm looking forward to your coming．
   Best wishes!
                                                                      Yours，
                                                                     Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫一封郵件介紹你校的相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排及其理由．注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．活動(dòng)計(jì)劃（打乒乓、包餃子…）
2．安排理由 （非常流行、帶來好運(yùn)…）
3．我的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
both…and…兩者都
what's more 再者
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
【高分句型】
1．Since Ping-Pong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a Ping-Pong game for the students．
since表示自從，引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
2．①What's more，they'll have a chance②to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．
①what's more 再者
②動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語，修飾前面的chance．
3．I think they will enjoy their time here．
think后是省略了that的賓語從句．

解答 Dear Mr．Green，
   I'm glad that you'll come to our school for a visit next term． Now I'll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．
   Since Ping-Pong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a Ping-Pong game for the students．【高分句型】They can learn from each other（活動(dòng)計(jì)劃--打乒乓及其理由）．What's more，they'll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．【高分句型】All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．（活動(dòng)計(jì)劃--包餃子及理由）I think they will enjoy their time here．（我的看法）【高分句型】
   I'm looking forward to your coming．
   Best wishes!
                                                    Yours．

                                                                    Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要注意主謂一致等問題．寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．