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6．研究表明音樂對人類的情緒、疾病，甚至對人的學習效果都有著重要的影響．請你以Music and I為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：你對音樂的看法是什么？在學習的時候你被允許聽音樂嗎？你喜歡什么樣的音樂及喜歡的理由是什么？注意：詞數(shù)80-100，文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）．參考詞匯：mood，learning efficiency（學習效率）
Music and I
Research has shown that music has an important effect on people．Research has shown that music has an important effect onpeople．So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music．If you have too much pressure，you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed．【高分句型一】People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music．And if you feel tired and sleepy，you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again．（對音樂的看法）My parents allow me to listen to music when I finish my homework．（昨晚作業(yè)可以聽音樂）When I feel lonely and sad，I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up．【高分句型二】It makes me happy again．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If you have too much pressure，you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed如果你有太多的壓力，你應(yīng)該聽流行音樂讓你感到放松．
if引導的條件狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
①When I feel lonely and sad，I often listen to soft music ②which always cheers me up當我感到孤獨和傷心的時候，我經(jīng)常聽輕柔的音樂能讓我開心起來．
①when引導的時間狀語從句．
②which引導的定語從句，修飾music．

解答 Research has shown that music has an important effect on people．So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music．If you have too much pressure，you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed．【高分句型一】People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music．And if you feel tired and sleepy，you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again．（對音樂的看法）My parents allow me to listen to music when I finish my homework．（做完作業(yè)可以聽音樂）When I feel lonely and sad，I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up．【高分句型二】It makes me happy again．（喜歡什么樣的音樂及喜歡的理由是什么）

點評 短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到語句通順、意思連貫，主旨健康，中心突出但同時切記不能完全照抄原文的翻譯．此外，考生在進行寫作的時候，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時學到的短語和句型，是文章的內(nèi)容更生動．