Question

今天是星期日,是陰雨天,全家人都不能出門,但是大家在家里都過得很開心.于是你寫一篇短文記下了正在發(fā)生的一切:爸爸正在和爺爺下象棋;奶奶正在看報紙;媽媽正在跟電視學習做菜;弟弟正在玩他心愛的玩具.字數(shù)60-70左右.

Answer 1

One possible version：
It is Sunday. It is a rainy day, so the whole family can not go out. But we are all having a good time at home.My father is playing chess with my grandpa. My grandma is reading a newspaper. My mom is learning how to cook with TV. My brother is having fun playing with his favorite toy. I am doing my homework in my room. We are very happy.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我和我的家人星期天正在做的事情。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查現(xiàn)在進行時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：It is ......；My father is.....；My grandma is .....及I am......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了星期天的天氣，接下來介紹我們一家人正在做的事情，最后指出我們都很高興。此處用了go out， having a good time， playing chess with，playing with及doing my homework等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。