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10．節(jié)約資源，保護環(huán)境，人人有責．最近幾年，低碳生活（Low-carbon Life）已受到越來越多人的關注．我們中學生也應該從身邊的小事做起，注重"低碳生活"．請你以"How to live a low-carbon life"為題，結合以下要點寫一篇短文，告訴同學們如何才能做到"低碳生活"．
•go to school on foot or by bike
•not forget to turn off the lights
•remember to turn off the tap（水龍頭）
•use both sides of paper
•not use plastic bags
•…
•…
注意：1．內容必須包括以上要點，同時要有自己的觀點（至少兩個）；
2．文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和姓名．詞數(shù)80個左右，開頭和結尾不計入總詞數(shù)．

How to live a low-carbon life
It's our duty to protect the environment．Low-carbon life is a good way to improve the environment．As students，what should we do to live a low-carbon life？Here I have some advice for you．
First，weshould go to school on foot or by bike instead of riding in cars．Second，don't forgrt to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom．If we don't use water，remember to turn off the tap．Third，we are supposed to use both sides of paper．We‘d better not use plastic bags when we do shopping．We can use cloth bags instead．What's more，we should also reuse the water sometimes．For example，when we finish washing clothes，we can use the water to clean the floor．
It's important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Second，don't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom．當我們離開教室別忘了關燈．
when引導的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
If we don't use water，remember to turn off the tap
if引導的條件狀語從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．

解答 How to live a low-carbon life
It's our duty to protect the environment．Low-carbon life is a good way to improve the environment．As students，what should we do to live a low-carbon life？Here I have some advice for you．
First，we should go to school on foot or by bike instead of riding in cars．（走路或者騎車上學）Second，don't forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom．【高分句型一】（關燈）If we don't use water，remember to turn off the tap【高分句型二】（關水龍頭）．Third，we are supposed to use both sides of paper．（紙的兩面都要用）We‘d better not use plastic bags when we do shopping．We can use cloth bags instead．（不用塑料袋）What's more，we should also reuse the water sometimes（再利用水）．For example，when we finish washing clothes，we can use the water to clean the floor．
It's important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment．

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