Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

你有一位筆友（pen friend）Mike，根據(jù)提示寫一篇100字左右的文章介紹他的情況，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意語(yǔ)句的連貫性。

1.Mike，13歲，來自澳大利亞，現(xiàn)和父母居住在中國(guó)。

2. 擅長(zhǎng)打籃球，加入了學(xué)校的籃球隊(duì)。每天早晨，他要花半個(gè)小時(shí)練習(xí)打籃球。

3.擅于和孩子相處，希望有一天(one day)能當(dāng)一名教師。

4.每天早晨，六點(diǎn)半起床、刷牙，然后吃完早飯，七點(diǎn)半，坐校車上學(xué)，上午，他有四堂課，下午兩堂課。五點(diǎn)鐘，回到家，五點(diǎn)半吃晚飯，然后做作業(yè)，九點(diǎn)上床就寢。

5. 非常喜歡動(dòng)物 ，在周末，喜歡和朋友們?nèi)��?dòng)物園玩。

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good penpal.His name is Mike.He is 13 years old.He comes from Australia.He is living in China with his parents now.He is good at playing basketball and he has joined the school basket team.He spends half an hour practising playing basketball every morning.He is good with kids and he wishes to be a teacher one day.He gets up at half past six in the morning and brushes his teeth.After breakfast he takes the school bus to school at half past seven.He has four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.He gets home at 5 p.m. and have dinner at half past five.Then he does his homework and goes to bed at 9p.m. He loves animals very much,so he likes to go to the zoo with his friends on weekends.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。