Question

 

假如你是Paul，你想推薦你的同學(xué)John獲得“最佳學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息，寫一封推薦信給你們的班主任王老師。

姓名	約翰（John）
學(xué)習(xí)情況	在7年級(jí)1班是最好的學(xué)生；擅長(zhǎng)所有的科目
個(gè)人品質(zhì)	友好；熱于助人
特長(zhǎng)及愛(ài)好	鋼琴?gòu)椀煤茫粣?ài)讀書(shū)；愛(ài)唱歌；喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)
好人好事	經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)；上周幫助一位迷路的孩子找到家；昨天救了一位 落水兒童

 

要求：1要點(diǎn)完整,表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫;

      2.不必逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不可出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、班級(jí)等;

      3.詞數(shù): 80個(gè)字 左右。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)）

Dear Mr Wang

I would like to recommend John for this year’s Best Student Award.

 

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   If John can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you.

                                                                       Yours

                                                                        Paul

 

Answer 1

【答案】

：Dear Mr Wang

I would like to recommend John for this year’s Best Student Award. He is the best student in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at all his subjects and likes reading, singing and doing sports. He can also play the piano well. He is friendly and often helps the other students with their lessons. Last week, he saw a boy lose his way and helped him get back home. Yesterday he saved a child out of water.

If John can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you soon.

                                                                   Yours

                                                                    Paul

【解析】：寫出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚、語(yǔ)言流暢，有句式變化，盡量減少基本語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。