Question

20．假設你是Jim，請你給旅行社的老板（Mr．Smith）寫一封信．信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．希望能夠去中國南部進行十天的旅行．
2．想要住在海邊，并且有一套足夠大，能夠容納5個人居住的公寓，最好能帶有廚房，能夠自己做飯來節(jié)約錢．
3．希望能提供一些活動，比如游泳，沙灘排球等．
4．最好能夠坐火車去．
要求：1．必須包含以上所有內(nèi)容．2．可以適當發(fā)揮，不得少于80 詞．
Dear Mr．Smith，
My family and I want to take a trip somewhere in southern China．I think you can provide me with some information．Here are my ideas：
I want to live near the sea．And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．Of course it would be nice if we get a room with a kitchen so we could save money by cooking our own meals．
As for the activities，can you provide some sports such as swimming and beach volleyball．We can swim in the blue water and play volleyball after dinner．How relaxing!
Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy．

Yours，
Jim．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．我們想有一套足夠大，能夠容納5個人居住的公寓，句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引導的不定式短語；which is big enough for five people作定語修飾 apartment，構(gòu)成一個定語從句．
②Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy．最后，如果我能乘火車到達那里，我會很高興．句子中if引導一個條件狀語從句，主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時，by train表示乘火車．

解答 Dear Mr Smith，
My family and I want to take a trip somewhere in southern China．I think you can provide me with some information．Here are my ideas：（引出話題）
 I want to live near the sea．And we would like to stay in an inexpensive apartment which is big enough for five people．（高分句型）Of course it would be nice if we get a room with a kitchen so we could save money by cooking our own meals．（住的環(huán)境）
 As for the activities，can you provide some sports such as swimming and beach volleyball．We can swim in the blue water and play volleyball after dinner．How relaxing!（希望做的活動）
 Last，if I can get there by train，I'll be happy（高分句型）．（希望出行的方式）
 Thank you very much!I hope you can reply to me as soon as possible!（祝愿）
                                                 Yours，
                                                    Jim

點評 這是一篇給出材料提綱作文，題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮．