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3．近來，"光盤行動（Clean Plate Campaign） 悄然流行，提倡"節(jié)約型社會（economized society）"已成共識．請你根據(jù)下列表格中的信息，用英語為某英語報(bào)社寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛鳛橐幻�中學(xué)生，在日常生活中應(yīng)該如何勤儉節(jié)約、反對浪費(fèi)，并作簡要評論．

What to do	What not to do
◆turn off the light ◆save as much paper as possible ◆…	◆not use one-off chopsticks（一次性筷子） ◆not spend money buying unnecessary things ◆…

注意：（1）短文須包括上述要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)：80詞左右，短文的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出（不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)）．
Let's start with the things around us!
Recently，the"Clean Plate Campaign"has been very popular with many people．Our government is doing its best to build an economized society．
As a middle school student，I thinkweshould join in the campaign．We can start the things around us．Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room．Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible．Thirdly，it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used．What's more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things．When we eat，we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food．
In a word，saving energy is very important．Let's work together from now on!．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Thirdly，①it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap ②after it is used．第三，對于我們來說，養(yǎng)成用水后隨手關(guān)水龍頭很重要．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
②after表示在…之后，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
①When we eat，②we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food．我們吃飯時(shí)最好不要用一次性筷子，不要浪費(fèi)食物．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②had better do sth 最好做某事．

解答 Let's start with the things around us!
  Recently，the"Clean Plate Campaign"has been very popular with many people．Our government is doing its best to build an economized society．
As a middle school student，I think we should join in the campaign．We can start the things around us．Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room（隨手關(guān)燈）．Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible．（節(jié)約用紙）Thirdly，it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used．【高分句型一】（關(guān)水龍頭）What's more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things．（不買不必要的東西）When we eat，we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food．【高分句型二】（不用一次性筷子，不浪費(fèi)食物）
     In a word，saving energy is very important．Let's work together from now on!

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