Question

假設你有一個好朋友叫Helen，請你根據(jù)以下提示，介紹你的這位朋友。

Helen	Appearance	高而苗條，方臉，微笑的眼睛，留著長發(fā)。
	Personalities	有幽默感；保守秘密；樂于助人（請舉一例）
	Hobbies	喜歡讀書，在今年“讀書周”活動讀書最多； 喜歡旅游，上周日，與父母乘長途汽車去了世界公園。
	Future plans	長大后她想當一名社會工作者。

 
要求：1. 須包含以上所有提示，可適當發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
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Answer 1

I have a good friend named Helen. She is tall and slim. She has a square face and smiling eyes. She has long hair.
Helen has a good sense of humour. I can tell her anything because she can keep a secret. She is also helpful. She often helps us with our homework. She likes reading. She reads/ read the most books in this year’s Reading Week. She likes travelling as well. Last Sunday, she with her parents went to the World Park by coach.
Helen is always willing to help others, so she would like to be a social worker when she grows up.

試題分析:
這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較詳細，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
點評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是單數(shù)第三人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。