Question

假如你和你的同學(xué)在6月8日(星期天)到敬老院慰問(wèn)了老人，請(qǐng)你把活動(dòng)的情況用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記。日記的格式及開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。日記的內(nèi)容還應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1．來(lái)回的時(shí)間及方式；
2．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：掃地，洗衣……；
3．活動(dòng)感受：很累但很愉快；要照顧尊重老人。
參考詞匯：respect   vt．尊重
注意：1．總詞數(shù)60一80；
2．所給的要點(diǎn)提示必須都用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
June 6, 2008  Sunday                                                        Sunny
Today my classmates and I went to the Old People’s home.___________________
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Answer 1

  Today my classmates and I went to the Old People’s Home on foot at 3 pm. As soon as we got there, we began to clean the rooms and wash clothes for the old people. Some of us talked with them. After that we gave them some per­formances. The old people all enjoyed themselves. We stayed there for about two hours before we walked home at 5 o’clock.
I felt very happy for what I had done although I was tired. I think everyone should look after and respect old people.

解析這是一則日記，有給定的要點(diǎn)，注意要點(diǎn)的全覆蓋，文章層次要分明、條理清楚，要把時(shí)間固定下來(lái)，這是記敘一件事要用過(guò)去時(shí);整個(gè)文章中的人稱要一致，首尾呼應(yīng)，不要隨意改動(dòng)，以免造成誤解。這篇文章主要以第一人稱為主，還要注意不同語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，也是寫(xiě)好英語(yǔ)作文的重要環(huán)節(jié)，因此，平時(shí)應(yīng)該注意不同語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。例如文章里的I felt very happy for what I had done although I was tired.就是很好的賓語(yǔ)從句的例子。