Question

假設(shè)你是江華，下周一你所在班級(jí)將舉行英語(yǔ)課外閱讀交流會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向同學(xué)們介紹 The Famous Rabbit-Tortoise Race 這一故事。

 

Rabbit	win the second race be good at running
Tortoise	win the third race swim across the river
	take turns to put …on the back reach… together
What I have learned:…

 

要求：

文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

詞數(shù)：90詞左右（開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that the rabbit decided

to have a second race. This time he didn’t sleep and won because he was good at running.

However, the tortoise didn’t give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. There was a river on the

way. The tortoise swam across it quickly and won. The story does not end here. In the last race

they took turns to put each on the back and reached the finishing point together. From the story I

have learned that with teamwork all of us can achieve success.

【解析】本題要求介紹我們所熟悉的龜兔賽跑的故事，這是一個(gè)我們都很熟悉的故事，寫作中注意將故事的內(nèi)容介紹清楚，并介紹我們從中得到的教訓(xùn)。寫作中注意敘述順序，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要記述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，故時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。人稱為第三人稱。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)。文中適當(dāng)使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。