Question

7．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，介紹一下你和你的朋友Peter外貌、性格等方面的不同，并談一談你對(duì)朋友的看法，怎樣才能能為你的朋友．可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展． 詞數(shù)，80 詞左右．

I	Peter
14歲	14歲
高的	矮的
外向，風(fēng)趣	嚴(yán)肅
運(yùn)動(dòng)	閱讀，音樂
…	…

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I like sports best when I am free當(dāng)我有空的時(shí)候我最喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
【高分句型二】
I think it's not necessary to be the same我認(rèn)為沒有必要是一樣的．
think后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My name is Tom．I have a good friend，his name is Peter．
Peter is the same age as me．But we are quite diferent in many ways．I am tall，but Peter is shorter than me（身高）I am an outgoing boy．My friends think I am funnyand make make them laugh．but Peter is more serious than me．he never tells jokes．（性格）As for hobbies，I like sports best when I am free．【高分句型一】But Peter would like to stay at home to read books and listen to music in his free time．（愛好）
I think it's not necessary to be the same【高分句型二】．We often help each other and share everything together（看法）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇話題作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是，主語(yǔ)是第一考o(jì)查比較級(jí)，下筆時(shí)要考慮好比較級(jí)的句型注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．