Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共10分）

Millie 想推薦李華做班長根據(jù)提示和要求寫一篇推薦信。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:

1、你想推薦李華當(dāng)班長；他自信……

2、他樂于助人，深受同學(xué)喜歡；

3、精力充沛，經(jīng)常做額外的工作……

4、謙虛，從不炫耀；

5、總共贏過6次科學(xué)競(jìng)賽；

6、你認(rèn)為……

注意：

1、推薦信必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2、省略號(hào)的地方必須用1-2句話適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3、詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右,文章開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

Dear Mr Wu,

I’m writing to recommend Li Hua ____________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Millie

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Wu,

I am writing to recommend LiHua as the new monitor. He has many good personal qualities. He is confident, hard-working and organized.

LiHua is helpful because he often teaches us how to learn English. He is always energetic and do extra work. He is modest and never show off. H e is the winner of six science compititions. He is kind and not selfish. He is very clever, creative and imaginative, he can come up with many new ideas. His favourite colours are yellow and white, because yellow is the colour of wisdom and white is the colour of purity.

When he feels stressed,white can make him calm.

I hope you will agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Millie

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。