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【題目】書面表達(dá)

泗陽---這顆蘇北大地上的璀璨明珠在過去的幾年中發(fā)生了很大的變化。作為泗陽人我們感到自豪和驕傲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，以“Changes in Siyang”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的朋友介紹泗陽的變化。

	過去	現(xiàn)在
環(huán)境	又窄又臟的馬路；到處垃圾；但卻有大片開闊的空間；	寬闊干凈的街道；路兩邊的綠化帶；但開闊的空間卻建起許多高樓；
生活	住在又小又舊的房子；空余時(shí)間打牌或聽收音機(jī)；	住在新公寓里；在家上網(wǎng)周游世界；大部分人有手機(jī)
交通	步行或騎自行車	乘公交或打的；許多人有自己的車；

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)；

2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可作必要的發(fā)揮；

3. 條理清楚、語句連貫，無語法錯(cuò)誤；

4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名等信息。

參考詞匯：綠化帶 green belts

Changes in Siyang

Many changes have taken place in Siyang over the years. __________________________________________________________________________________

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Now people here are enjoying a comfortable life.

Answer 1

【答案】

Many changes have taken place in Siyang over the years. In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in Siyang. There was rubbish everywhere. However, there were large open spaces. Now the streets are wide and clean, with many green trees on both green belts. The government has also built lots of tall buildings in some open spaces. Years ago, people lived in small old houses. Now most of them have moved into new flats. They used to play cards or listen to the radio in their free time, but now they travel around the world online at home. Moreover, mobile phones make communication easier now. In the past, people travelled on foot or by bike, but now they can go around by bus or taxi. Many families even have their own cars. Now people here are enjoying a comfortable life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。要求介紹泗水的變化。介紹時(shí)主要從環(huán)境，交通，生活三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行。由于介紹的是最近幾年的變化，有過去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比，所以時(shí)態(tài)上可能用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，過去時(shí)態(tài)。寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用。對(duì)于現(xiàn)在和過去的對(duì)比中注意used to的使用。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。語句及詞匯運(yùn)用靈活，如表示過去：In the past, there were…; They used to play cards…，Years ago, people lived in small old houses。短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色.如: Moreover, In the past，Many families even have their own cars. also等。