Question

【題目】陽光中學(xué)正舉辦主題為My dream home的征文比賽。假設(shè)你是Andy，想給學(xué)生會(huì)投 稿，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇70詞左右的短文。要求包含所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā) 揮，語句通順，書寫整潔。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 夢想之家位于海邊，很大，有兩層；

2. 共有二十個(gè)房間，其中有一個(gè)大客廳、五間漂亮的臥室和一個(gè)大書房；

3. 房子外面有一個(gè)足球場，可以和朋友們一起踢球。

Answer 1

【答案】Sample writing

I’m Andy from Class 1, Grade 7. I’d like to say something about my dream house. It is very big and is not far from the sea. In the house, there are two floors and twenty rooms in all. Among the rooms, there is a big living room, five nice bedrooms and a big study. Two bedrooms are for my parents and me, and the others are prepared for the guests.

My favourite place is the football field outside, because I like football very much and I’d like to play football with my friends there. I also like walking on the beach. I can have fun every day after school.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我理想的家園。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m……; I’d like to……; It is……; there is……; My favourite place is……; because I like……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。