Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

親愛的同學(xué)們，課余時(shí)間、周末、假期，你們通常都是怎樣度過的呢？請(qǐng)以“My Free Time”為題，寫一篇短文。

信息提示：1、根據(jù)信息提示，把握要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不逐字翻譯；

2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名或校名；

3、詞數(shù)為50~100。文章的開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time.

Answer 1

【答案】 My Free Time

I have lots of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and studybetter. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it is a good way to relax myself. Of course , I help myparents with the housework at the weekends .I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文題材緊扣學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生有自我發(fā)揮的空間。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘話題內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章思路清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。