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【題目】書面表達(dá)

音樂、電影、繪畫、攝影，在眾多的藝術(shù)形式中，電影廣受人們的喜愛。假如你最喜歡的藝術(shù)形式是英語電影，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。

藝術(shù)形式	英語電影
喜歡理由	1. 學(xué)到許多英語單詞，訓(xùn)練聽說技能
	2. 大多數(shù)英語電影是很有教育意義的(educational) ……
	3. 認(rèn)識一些著名的演員，比如Audrey Hepburn……
	4. ……（自擬）
存在問題	有許多作業(yè)要做，沒有時間看電影。 希望能處理好學(xué)習(xí)和愛好的關(guān)系。

注意：1. 表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them.

Firstly, I can learn many English words and practice listening and speaking through watching English films. Secondly, most of the English films are educational. Some of them make you more confident. Thirdly, I can know some famous actors, such as Audrey Hepburn. She was considered by many people as a superstar, not only for her acting in the films but also for her efforts in charity work. Finally, I also can learn about the culture of England and America.

However, there is a problem. I have no time to watch films because of too much homework now. I hope to deal with the relationship between study and hobbies.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。要求語句通順、意思連貫。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照寫作要求，根據(jù)漢語提示，用簡潔的語言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語意思，語言流暢。本文寫作思路清晰，特別是一些副詞的運(yùn)用，比如：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly Finally,等，使語意更加連貫，層次分明。并依據(jù)要求，提出了自己的希望I hope to deal with the relationship between study and hobbies.