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3．假如你是李強，有一天在上學路上，你看到趙王河公園岸邊的道路損壞嚴重，一些彩磚不見去向，影響人們的出行，請用英語給China Daily菏澤頻道寫一封信，反映這一問題，并提出你的看法和建議．

（一）參考詞匯：destroy毀壞；color bricks彩磚；disappear消失；repair修復；take measures采取措施；protect保護；public facilities公共設施
（二）其他要求：100字左右；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總字數．
Dear Editor，
I'm a high school student．            
Li Qiang．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 One day，①on my way to school I found②that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park，the road ③was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared，④which would affect people's going out．有一天，我在上學的路上發(fā)現趙王河公園岸邊的道路被嚴重破壞，一些彩色磚已經不見了，這會影響人們的外出．
①on one's way to 在去…的路上
②that引導賓語從句作found的賓語
③一般過去時的被動語態(tài)，was/were+過去分詞
④which引導的非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的整個句子．
高分句型二：
①Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city ②to live in．只有這樣，我們才能生活在一個更美麗，更舒適的城市里．
①only位于句首，形成主謂部分倒裝．
②動詞不定式作后置定語修飾city

解答 Dear Editor，
I'm a high school student．One day，on my way to school I found that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park，the road was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared，which would affect people's going out．【高分句型一】Perhaps these bricks were carried away by some people nearby and kept by themselves．I'm very sorry about that．【反映環(huán)境破壞問題】
Since the public facilities are often destroyed like that，I suggest that our government should repair the road as soon as possible and take some measures to protect these public facilities．And as for us students，whenever we find someone destroying our public facilities，we should make efforts to stop him or her in time．Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city to live in．【高分句型二】【我的看法和建議】
Li Qiang

點評 本范文層次清楚，條理分明．短文分為兩部分，第一部分是寫作者在上學路上看到了一些現象．本段敘述清楚，表達準確．用了賓語從句，定語從句等等表達形式，使得本段生動具體．第二部分是作者的看法與建議．條理清楚，中心突出．本段使用了賓語從句，時間狀語從句；還準確恰當地使用了as soon as，take measures，as for，make efforts，in this way等等結構，給本段增色不少．