Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

假如你們班要舉行一次看圖講英語(yǔ)故事比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面圖片內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一個(gè)故事來(lái)為你的發(fā)言做準(zhǔn)備。70詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

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參考詞匯：烏龜turtle；兔子rabbit；比賽race

Once upon a time，a turtle and a rabbit had an argument about who could run faster.________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Once upon a time，a turtle and a rabbit had an argument about who could run faster.They decided to have a race.The race started.The rabbit ran very quickly but the turtle walked slowly.“The turtle is so slow.I will have a rest under the tree.”said the rabbit.After a while，the rabbit woke up.At this time，the turtle was far away.The rabbit ran quickly but it was too late.In the end，the turtle won the race.

【解析】看

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文。它是龜兔賽跑的故事，本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是過(guò)去式。對(duì)于看圖作文一定要看清畫(huà)面，了解圖示所表達(dá)的主要內(nèi)容，尤其要注意圖片中的人物、地點(diǎn)和背景；把握關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)，積極展開(kāi)聯(lián)想；逐圖進(jìn)行描述，綜合起來(lái)思考。用自己最熟悉最有把握的句型和詞匯來(lái)表達(dá)。盡可能地用多樣化的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句型，使語(yǔ)言豐富、流暢。寫(xiě)完之后要檢查修改。要對(duì)照題目要求，認(rèn)真通讀全句、對(duì)話或短文，檢查內(nèi)容有無(wú)遺漏，時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)是否妥當(dāng)，單詞的拼寫(xiě)是否正確，主謂是否一致，句子的語(yǔ)序和表達(dá)是否符合英文習(xí)慣等，盡量減少錯(cuò)誤。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完整、應(yīng)用詞匯靈活準(zhǔn)確，句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，上下文連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。