Question

【題目】書面表達

這學期，我班轉(zhuǎn)來了一位新同學，她叫Sunny。下面請你根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇英語文章，介紹一下Sunny的情況。

1. Sunny出生于北京，是一位12歲的女孩. 就讀于陽光中學，學習刻苦，是班上的尖子生。

2. 她擅長唱歌，想當一位像王菲一樣的歌手。

3. 有禮貌，樂于助人，深受同學喜歡。

4. 喜歡運動，很少吃零食，經(jīng)常吃蔬菜和水果，是個很健康的女孩。

5.我們都想和她成為好朋友。

要求：語句通順、要點齊全；詞數(shù)：70詞左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

A new classmate

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Answer 1

【答案】

A new classmate

My new classmate Sunny is from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. She is 12 years old. She wears glasses. She often wears sports clothes and trainers. And she looks smart and modern. She likes studying. She is a top student at school. She loves singing, too. She wants to be a singer like Wang Fei. She loves sports and hardly has hamburgers for lunch. She often eats vegetables and fruit. She is a healthy girl. She is a polite and helpful girl. He often donates his pocket money to Project Hope. I think she is a good girl. We all want to make friends with her.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的新同學。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：She is..；she never eats…；She shares…及she can…等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達自己要和好友保持聯(lián)系的愿望。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的新同學的名字，接下來介紹她的特點和喜好，最后說我們都想和她交朋友。此處用了often，too，hardly等這些副詞的運用也讓文章增色不少。