Question

同學們，眼看三年的初中生涯快過去了， 回想初中三年，一定有你經(jīng)歷過的快樂或憂傷的事，有令你感動或難忘的同學，有關(guān)愛你伴你成長的老師，父母和親人，在這畢業(yè)之際，你要對他或他們說些什么呢/? 請你以“Thanks for…….. ”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的作文。（15分）
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Answer 1

 
Thanks for my English teacher
I have been studied in middle school for three years.In a few days,I will graduate.I will never forget my English teacher.I would like to thank her for all the help she gave me.
My English teacher is a beautiful woman.She is kind but strict.She is also humorous.She always made her class interesting and active.My Spoken English was poor,and I failed the exam.She did not blame me.She helped me with my English after class.It helped a lot.My English is now better and better.She was always patient when I asked her some questions.I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English.I hope her everything goes well.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，題材貼近學生學習生活實際，內(nèi)容涉及對父母、親人、老師和同學的感恩�？忌�只要確定感恩主體，然后用正確的英語把相關(guān)內(nèi)容表達出來即可。因此，在動筆前要認真審題，盡量抓住要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過去時態(tài)，行文時要注意人稱轉(zhuǎn)換及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文開篇點題，對老師的幫助表示感謝。接著回顧過去，難忘老師的幫助和教誨。短文使用了大量的句式和短語，如：I would like to thank her for---、She is kind but strict、She always made her class interesting and active、She helped me with my English after class、I hope her everything goes well等，學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。