Question

4．Write at least 60words on the topic"I want to invent ______"
（以"我想要發(fā)明 ______"為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
（注意：1、在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整．2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．）
The following is for reference only．（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）
•It can be used to…
•It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to…

Answer 1

分析 寫作之前要審清要求，整理如下：1．不少于60詞．
                            2．短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息．
                            3．盡量用上提供的句型．

解答 I want to invent a time machine
      As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays，I would rather learning about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learning from a textbook．That's why if I can work as a great inventor，inventing a time machine will be my first choice．It can be used to visit one of best schools in Tang Dynasty．As we all know，Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education．Therefore，when I visit the school of the ancient city，I cannot only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well．Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past，I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out．It will be exciting to have a time machine．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題要求寫一篇有關(guān)學(xué)生最想要發(fā)明的東西的議論文．要求中已經(jīng)給出一些要求．動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真寫作要求，確定寫作內(nèi)容；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改．