Question

【題目】假如你叫溫濤，你的美國筆友Andy 參加了漢語培訓(xùn)班學(xué)習(xí)漢語。他最近寫信向你詢問如何學(xué)習(xí)外語。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示和你自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的體會(huì)給Andy 寫一封回信。

注意：(1)回信需要包括全部要點(diǎn)；(2)文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；(3)詞數(shù)80左右。

Dear Andy,

I’m very glad that you are learning Chinese. I know it isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. __________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Wen Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Linda，

I'm very glad that you are learning Chinese. I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.

Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance/ take every opportunity to practise speaking Chinese, both in and out of class. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What's more, you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day. Above all, I think you should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty. I'm sure you'll succeed with/through your hard work.

Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的體會(huì)。根據(jù)提示主要寫課上如何做，多交流，然后根據(jù)自己的體會(huì)再寫兩條建議。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語的應(yīng)用使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理如Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class，so that，both in and out of class，. What's more, you'd better，Above all, be confident in yourself，don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty.等。