Question

【題目】書面表達

請根據以下中文提示,寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。

假設你是Li Ming, 請給你的美國筆友Tom 寫一封 e—mail，介紹你的英語老師Mr. Lee。要點如下：

1. 他40歲，方臉，常帶微笑，來自美國；

2. 為人慷慨，富于幽默感，喜歡交朋友；

3. 他從不使課堂無聊，課后常幫我們解決問題；

4. 他希望我們學校有藏書豐富的圖書館。

5. 希望中國學生遲點上學、早點放學，作業(yè)少，課外活動多。

注意：

1.詞數80左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

2. 文中不要提及真實的校名和人名。

Dear Tom,

How are you recently? Now I’ll tell you something about my English teacher Mr. Lee.

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I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How are you recently? Now I’ll tell you something about my English teacher Mr. Lee.

Mr. Lee is forty years old. He comes from America. He has a square face and there is always a big smile on it. Mr. Lee is very generous, he has a good sense of humour and likes making friends. He’s outgoing and gets along well with us students. His class is very interesting. After class, he often helps us with our problems. He hopes our school has a big library with many books in it. He also hopes Chinese students go to school late and finish classes early. They have fewer homework and more activities after school. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹你的英語老師Mr. Lee。本文做給材料比較詳細，動筆前先根據材料確定時態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內容。根據內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態(tài)，人稱應該是第三人稱。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯。

寫作亮點：在寫書面表達時首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱，這篇文章在這方面做得非常到位；在句子的結構上，多次用到了動詞的三單形式。表達的要點全面，語意連貫。