Question

4．請根據(jù)下列信息，用英語寫一篇日記．
要點(diǎn)：
活動時(shí)間：10月17日（星期六）
結(jié)合地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校大門口
出發(fā)時(shí)間：早上八點(diǎn)
到達(dá)時(shí)間：早上八點(diǎn)半
活動地點(diǎn)：人民公園（the People's Park）
交通工具：公共汽車
活動內(nèi)容：上午做游戲，中午野餐，下午拍照，參觀動物園
返回時(shí)間：下午五點(diǎn)

注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包括上面所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80字．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．

Saturday October 17^th
It was fine．I went for an outing with my classmates today．At 8：00a．m．we met at the school gate andafter 30 minutes we took a bus to the People's Park．It took us half an hour to get there．
The sun was shining and there were many people in the park．In the morning，we played all kinds of games．We had a picnic in the park at noon．After the picnic，we took many photos．Then we spent about one hour visiting the zoo．We went back to our school at 5：00p．m．Although I was a little tired，I felt very happy．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It took us half an hour to get there花了我們半個(gè)小時(shí)到達(dá)那里．
it takes sb+時(shí)間+to do sth 某人花時(shí)間做某事
【高分句型二】
Although I was a little tired，I felt very happy．雖然我有點(diǎn)累，我感到很開心．
although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．

解答 Saturday October 17^th
It was fine．I went for an outing with my classmates today．
At 8：00a．m．we met at the school gate and after 30 minutes we  took a bus to the People's Park．（時(shí)間地點(diǎn)，交通工具）It took us half an hour to get there．
The sun was shining and there were many people in the park．In the morning，we played all kinds of games．We had a picnic in the park at noon．After the picnic，we took many photos．Then we spent about one hour visiting the zoo．（活動內(nèi)容）We went back to our school at 5：00p．m．（返回時(shí)間）Although I was a little tired，I felt very happy．

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