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2．據(jù)報(bào)道，由于缺乏鍛煉，中學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視，近年來(lái)，我市繼續(xù)開(kāi)展初中畢業(yè)生升學(xué)體育考試工作，旨在切實(shí)貫徹黨的教育方針，全面提高學(xué)生身體素質(zhì)，同學(xué)們剛剛參加過(guò)初中畢業(yè)生升學(xué)體育考試，你有何感想？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，寫一篇90詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文．
提示：1．鍛煉身體的好處：strong，healthy，energetic…
2．鍛煉身體的方式：ball games，running，swimming…favorite sport；
3．請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)體育鍛煉的看法和建議．
要求：1．內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，調(diào)理清楚，字跡工整．
Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!As we know，taking sports will keep one healthy．It can help us keep strong．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．As a middle school student，I am busy with study．I have little time to take exercise，but I still do sports as often as I can．I play ball games，running，swimming and so on．My favorite sport is playing basketball．I often watch basketball matches．What's more，I think outdoor activities are sports，too．I also take an active part in other kinds of activities．At weekend I often go for a picnic with my family．I also like climbing mountains，flying kites，boating and so on．I enjoy colorful sports．Let's take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)剬?duì)體育鍛煉的看法和建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．鍛煉身體的好處：
2．鍛煉身體的方式：
3．請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)體育鍛煉的看法和建議．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
keep healthy 保持健康
be busy with 忙于…
as…as sb can 盡可能的…
what's more 再者
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．
"the more…，the more…"句型為"the+形容詞或副詞比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)"結(jié)構(gòu)，常表示"越…，就越…"，是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，其中前面的句子是狀語(yǔ)從句，后面的句子是主句．
2．I have little time ①to take exercise，②but I still do sports ③as often as I can．
①動(dòng)詞不定式做后置定語(yǔ)，修飾time．
②but表轉(zhuǎn)折
③as…as sb can 盡可能的…

解答 Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!As we know，taking sports will keep one healthy．It can help us keep strong．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．【高分句型】（鍛煉身體的好處）As a middle school student，I am busy with study．I have little time to take exercise，but I still do sports as often as I can．【高分句型】I play ball games，running，swimming and so on．My favorite sport is playing basketball．I often watch basketball matches．What's more，I think outdoor activities are sports，too．I also take an active part in other kinds of activities．At weekend I often go for a picnic with my family．I also like climbing mountains，flying kites，boating and so on．I enjoy colorful sports．（鍛煉身體的方式及看法）Let's take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late．（建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣