Question

請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀以下關(guān)于初三學(xué)生睡眠時(shí)間調(diào)查結(jié)果的數(shù)據(jù)圖表，以圖表為依據(jù)簡單分析初三學(xué)生的日常作息情況，談?wù)勀愕母邢�，并就如何安排好�?fù)習(xí)迎考提些建議， 寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文。（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
Write a passage based on the given graphic with at least 60 words
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）

Answer 1

One possible version：
Most students need about 8 to more than 9 hours of sleep every night. Unfortunately, many students don't get enough sleep. recent studies show that 30 percent of the students sleep 6 hours every night ; 55 percent of the students sleep 6 to 7 hours every night ; 12 percent of the students sleep 8 hours every night and only 4 percent of the students sleep more than 10 hours every night.
Your entrance examination at once, and I expect you to be very busy preparing for it and a little nervous. But I believe that you will do well.I am going to give you a few practical hints. It is no good to go on studying until the last minute of examination. What you need in the exam is a clear mind. If you tire yourself out before the examination, you will not be mentally and physically ready for it. So a day or two before the examination just relax-leave your books shut and try some other things: get out into the open air;do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun.
　　　I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: preparing for ；at once；I am going to give you a few practical hints. do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun;I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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