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根據(jù)提示寫一篇日記，記錄十月一日（星期一）。你和你的朋友曹剛一起去參觀上海博物館的事。詞數(shù)：70左右。

1. 距離：博物館離家約兩公里；

2. 交通工具：決定騎自行車去；

3. 時間：八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，十點(diǎn)回家；

4. 內(nèi)容：見到了許多照片、實(shí)物等，學(xué)到了很多內(nèi)容。還看見了許多游人。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Monday, Oct. 1                                     Fine

Today is the first day of the National Day. My friend Cao Gang and I went to visit Shanghai Museum. It is about 2 kilometres away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at 8 o’clock. At the museum we saw many photos and other things. We learned a lot. There we saw a lot of children with their parents. At ten we left the museum for home. We had a wonderful time today.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示根據(jù)提示寫一篇日記，記錄十月一日（星期一）。你和你的朋友曹剛一起去參觀上海博物館的事，寫作中能正確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，注意了應(yīng)用文體日記的書寫格式，語句通順，符合邏輯。