Question

16．假設(shè)你是李華，你的加拿大筆友Mike最近對(duì)中文很感興趣，寫信給你詢問如何學(xué)好中文．請你根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，給他寫一封回信．
提示：

How to learn Chinese well
1	read Chinese newspapers and magazines
2	listen to Chinese songs
3	speak Chinese as much as possible
4	keep a Chinese diary

注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)：80-100詞．開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)學(xué)生真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校名稱．
Dear Mike，
I'm very glad to receive your letter．           ．
I hope the a dvice will help you learn Chinese well．Looking forward to your reply．Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I'm writing to offer you some advice on ①how to learn Chinese well．我寫信給你給你一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好中文的建議．
①疑問詞+不定式結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語
高分句型二：
Besides，①listening to your favorite Chinese songs is actually an interesting and effective way②to improve your listening．此外，聽你最喜歡的中國歌曲實(shí)際上是一個(gè)來提高你的聽力的有趣和有效的方式．
①動(dòng)名詞做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)
②動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Mike，
     I'm very glad to receive your letter．In your letter，you mentioned that you are interested in learning Chinese．I'm writing to offer you some advice on how to learn Chinese well．【高分句型一】【點(diǎn)題，引起下文】
        First，it is helpful to read some good Chinese newspapers and magazines．In this way your reading ability can be improved．Besides，listening to your favorite Chinese songs is actually an interesting and effective way to improve your listening．【高分句型二】More importantly，try to speak Chinese as much as possible and don't be afraid of making mistakes．The more you speak，the better your spoken-Chinese will be．Finally，I think keeping a diary in Chinese is surely a good way to improve your writing．【學(xué)好中文的方法】
    I hope the advice will help you learn Chinese well．Looking forward to your reply．【我的希望】
                                                                          Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．