Question

【題目】同學(xué)們，中考過后，你們即將告別親愛的母校。回首三年的母校生活，學(xué)校里的很多規(guī)則 有助于你的健康成長。你能談一談你們學(xué)校的校規(guī)嗎？你對這些校規(guī)有何看法？你對母校有 哪些合理化建議？請你以My school rules為題寫一篇短文。

要求：1. 語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語意通順、連貫；

2. 書寫工整、規(guī)范；

3. 根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，請做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

4. 詞數(shù)80左右。文章的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My school rules

We have many rules in our school.

Answer 1

【答案】My school rules

We have many rules in our school. I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.

Here are some good rules. We can’t be late for school. We must listen carefully to teachers in class. Mobile phones are not allowed to bring into the school. These rules are good for our study and I like them.

I think there are also a few unnecessary rules. For example, students are not allowed to wear long hair. I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.

【解析】本文談一談對母校校規(guī)的看法，提出一些合理性的建議。所以句子的主語應(yīng)該用第一人稱，句子的時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，所寫的句子應(yīng)該用一些高級詞匯及句式，不要寫漢語式的英語。短文用了一些短語和句式，如：be good for有益；be allowed to do sth被允許做某事；I think most of them are good for us, but some are not so good.I think there are also a few unnecessary rules.I think girls should be allowed to wear long hair. I hope these rules can be changed.用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，是亮點句。