Question

【題目】假如這幅漫畫表現(xiàn)的是你所經(jīng)歷的事情，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示描述事情經(jīng)過并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

提示詞：jaywalk v.亂穿馬路；run the red light闖紅燈

注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名。詞數(shù)80-100。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Friday afternoon, when I was on my way home from school, I saw a group of people jaywalking at the crossing. A volunteer tried to stop them, but no one listened to him. Instead, they ran the red light quickly. Just then, a bus came. One of them was nearly hit by the running bus.

In my opinion, jaywalking is a bad habit. It puts not only yourself but also other people in danger. I hope all of us should keep the traffic rules and stop running the red light. Look both sides / ways when you cross the road.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文。由于是描述過去的經(jīng)歷，故用過去時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)要求用第一人稱。末段發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇短文層次分明，語言流暢，能把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。In my opinion, not only…but also等的應(yīng)用給短文增色不少。