Question

【題目】書面表達（15分）

請根據(jù)以下提示介紹你所喜愛的籃球明星林書豪（Jeremy Shu-How Lin）。

1. 林書豪，男，24歲，身高191厘米，看起來很強壯。他來自美國。

2. 在業(yè)余時間，他喜歡聽音樂和看書。他認(rèn)為看書很有趣。

3. 他籃球打得很好。他的夢想是在下屆奧運會（next Olympic Games）上打球。

My Favorite Basketball Player

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Favorite Basketball Player

Jeremy Shu-How Lin is my favorite basketball player. He is 24 years old. He comes from America. He is 191cm tall. He looks strong and plays basketball very well.

Jeremy Shu-How Lin plays basketball every day. In his free time, he likes reading and listening to music. He thinks reading is fun.

Jeremy Shu-How Lin has a dream. He wants to play in the next Olympic games . I hope his dream can come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹介紹你所喜愛的籃球明星林書豪。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Jeremy Shu-How Lin is...，He is ...，he likes...，He wants...，I hope...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后祝愿林書豪夢想成真。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了林書豪是我最喜愛的籃球明星，接下來介紹林書豪的年齡、國籍、長相和愛好，最后介紹林書豪的夢想，并祝愿他夢想成真。此處come from, play basketball, like doing sth, want to do sth, come true等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。