Question

 在你的記憶里，兒時的家鄉(xiāng)是否還是現(xiàn)在的樣子呢？是不是在悄然間，你的家鄉(xiāng)已發(fā)生了變化？請用五句話描述家鄉(xiāng)十年來的變化，注意使用現(xiàn)在完成時。

分析：本次寫作是使用五個獨立的句子，用現(xiàn)在完成時來描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化。

行文思路：由題目中要求可知，本次寫作可以從五個方面的變化來入手，如衣、食、住、行等。髙分點攏：正確使用現(xiàn)在完成時，注意動詞過去分詞的變化。

佳作展示：

1. __________________________ 

2. _________________________  

3.  _________________________ 

4.  _________________________ 

5. _________________________  

Answer 1

1. We have lived in taller and brighter buildings.

2. We have built more wide roads.

3. Many families have had their own cars.

4. People have had more and healthier food to eat.

5. People have had different kinds of clothes to satisfy their needs.