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【題目】書面表達(dá)

動(dòng)物是人類的好朋友，沒有動(dòng)物就沒有人類，但有些人亂砍濫伐樹木，有的甚至為了賺更多的錢而獵殺動(dòng)物，不知不覺中動(dòng)物生存環(huán)境越來越差,動(dòng)物也越來越少,有的甚至瀕臨滅絕。請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇關(guān)于如何更好地保護(hù)動(dòng)物的文章,請你提出至少兩條合理化的建議。

提示：1. environment （環(huán)境） 2. rare （稀有的） 3. hunter ( 獵人)

注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包括表格中提供的信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)

2.詞數(shù)：80—100詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入中詞數(shù)。

How to protect animals better

As we all know, animals are our friends. But now many animals are in danger, so it’s our duty to protect them better.

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to protect animals better

As we all know, animals are our friends. But now many animals are in danger, so it’s our duty to protect them better.

As time goes by，the situation is becoming more and more difficult. The number of the animals is becoming smaller and smaller because people cut down so many trees that the environment is becoming worse and worse. Many animals have less and less land to live on. Also, some hunters often kill animals for more money. As a result, some animals become rare.

What can we do to protect them? Animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. I think we should call on more people to protect them better. First, it’s a good idea to set up more zoos and nature parks for endangered animals to live in. Second, we should stop people killing them. Also, we can plant more trees to make it easier for them to have a better life.

In a word, no animals, no hum beings. So we must take an action to protect them better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是發(fā)揮想象用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該文內(nèi)容合理，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，段落清晰，要點(diǎn)齊全。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。