Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1小題，滿分20分）

你班新轉(zhuǎn)入一位來自澳大利亞的同學(xué)，名叫Sophia。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹Sophia及班級(jí)的情況，并對(duì)Sophia的到來表示歡迎。

About Sophia	About the class
from Sydney, 15 years old	hard－working
outgoing, happy	helpful, get along well
good at swimming	groupwork
…	…

注意：（1）短文內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)增加；

（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

（3）詞數(shù)：80－100；

（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

短文首句：Hello, class, May I have your attention, please?

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, class. May I have your attention, please?

Today, we have a new classmate. Her name is Sophia. She is from Sydney, Australia , and she is 15 years old. She is an out-going girl with big eyes and she would like to make others happy. She is good at swimming. All the classmates in our class are hard-working and helpful. So I think we can get on well with Sophia. I hope we can do a lot of group work and make a rapid progress together in the future.

That’s all, thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)提綱提示，介紹新同學(xué)Sophia及班級(jí)的情況。要包含所提示的信息，并可適當(dāng)增加。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，用第三人稱形式，要注意主語(yǔ)三人稱單數(shù)時(shí)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要像名詞變復(fù)數(shù)那樣加s或es.

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本范文按照題目要求和提綱提示進(jìn)行寫作，包含了所提示的所有信息，層次清楚，敘述完整，重點(diǎn)突出。文中介紹人物時(shí)的with短語(yǔ)，be good at，get on well with等等結(jié)構(gòu)用得很好。作為一篇發(fā)言稿，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)捷、精煉，是它的另一大特點(diǎn)。