Question

寫作 (計(jì)15分)

“中國式過馬路”現(xiàn)象成為各大媒體熱點(diǎn)話題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文。

“中國式”過馬路特點(diǎn)：十字路口，人們成群結(jié)隊(duì)過馬路，根本不看交通燈。

后果：每年，很多人因?yàn)椴蛔袷亟煌ǚㄒ?guī)而受傷或喪命。

闖紅燈的理由：忙，沒時(shí)間等；司機(jī)應(yīng)該等行人。

解決辦法：分發(fā)傳單，讓更多人知道交通安全的重要性；建更多的人行天橋；懲罰闖紅燈者。

要求：

1. 必須包括所有相關(guān)信息（不必逐詞翻譯），可以做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

詞數(shù)90左右（開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

參考詞匯：遵守交通法規(guī)：follow the traffic rules       闖紅燈：run the traffic lights

行人：pedestrian    傳單：leaflet    人行天橋：footbridge

The Chinese style road crossing has become a hot topic in the media recently. At the crossroads in China, many people                                                                           

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The Chinese style road crossing has become a hot topic in the media recently. At the crossroads in China,many people

cross the roads in groups, they don’t look at the traffic lights at all . Because of this, every year, lots of people get hurt or even lose their lives. When asked why they run the traffic lights, many people say they are too busy to wait for the green lights. Besides, they think drivers should wait for the pedestrians. To solve the problem, we should give out leaflets to help more people understand the importance of traffic safety. More footbridges should be built to make it easier and safer to cross the street. People who run the traffic lights should be punished. By doing so, we will be able to get around safely.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)。寫作中應(yīng)先簡單描述一下中國式過馬路的特點(diǎn)，并分析原因，提出自己的建議。然后列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should后面動(dòng)詞用原形。適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，注意從句的應(yīng)用，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。