Question

8．假如你們班級(jí)將召開以"我眼中的自己"為主題的班會(huì)，你如何評(píng)價(jià)自己呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿．
提示：
1．自我肯定：在家里、在學(xué)校…
2．應(yīng)改進(jìn)之處：不愛運(yùn)動(dòng)、浪費(fèi)…
3．努力方向：…
要求內(nèi)容：
1．包括以上所給提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．寫作中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
4．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
提示詞（僅供參考）：obey遵守environment環(huán)境
Hello，everyone!I'm glad to have a chance to say something about myself．In my eyes，I am a good student．                                                           

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Not only can I do every schoolwork，but also I can get good grades in the most of the exams我不僅僅能做每個(gè)功課，我還能大部分考試得好成績．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…，not only放句首引起倒裝．
【高分句型二】
I seldom do sports  and wasting  is another bad habit that I have我極少最運(yùn)動(dòng)，浪費(fèi)是我的另一個(gè)壞習(xí)慣．
that I have是定語從句，修飾bad habit．

解答 Hello，everyone!I'm glad to have a chance to say something about myself．In my eyes，I am a good student．Not only can I do every schoolwork，but also I can get good grades in the most of the exams．【高分句型一】I am also a good child in my parents'eyes．Because I always help them do housework．（自我肯定）However，I still have some bad behaviors that make me not perfect enough．For example，I do not care about others'feelings and I don't like doing some cleaning．I seldom do sports  and wasting  is another bad habit that I have．【高分句型二】（應(yīng)改進(jìn)之處）
During these three years．I have learnt many thing．I think I will become a good teenager that not only good in my study，but also can behave well in my daily life．（努力反向）

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