Question

【題目】文段表達(dá)

請(qǐng)根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫(xiě)作。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。

假如你是李華，你的學(xué)校要舉行主題為“My Best Friend”的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英文介紹你最好的朋友，包括他（她）的外貌或者性格特點(diǎn)，你經(jīng)常和他（她）一起做什么并分享一件你們共同經(jīng)歷的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語(yǔ)：humor, popular, strong, helpful, play football, relax, excited, special

提示問(wèn)題：

1. What is your best friend like?

2. What do you often do together?

3. Share one memory of something you did together and describe your feelings about it.

Answer 1

【答案】

My Best Friend

We all need friends in life and the memory of something we did together is still clear in my mind. My best friend is a 14-year-old boy. He has short hair and small eyes. A good sense of humor makes him very popular in my class. I like to talk with him about the world and his words can please me a lot. After school, we often play football together to have fun and relax.

One time when we were playing football, my friend kicked the football into the neighbor's garden. To get the ball, we had to ask the neighbor to throw the ball out of the garden. The neighbor was angry and shouted at us, "What're you doing here?" We had nothing to say but say "sorry" again and again. Then we ran away quickly. It was embarrassing, but I have learned that "SORRY" is an amazing and helpful word.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。所給材料要求明確，提綱挈領(lǐng)，層次清楚，內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活，學(xué)生有自由發(fā)揮的空間。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn): 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式、短語(yǔ)如：“make+形容詞”的用法、 talk with sb about sth、 have nothing to do but…結(jié)構(gòu)等，這為文章增添了不少文采，是一篇難得的佳作。