Question

【題目】（題文）書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，描述一起謀殺案件。

1.昨晚11點(diǎn)到12點(diǎn)之間，人民路上發(fā)生了一起謀殺案，被害者是一名司機(jī)，四十多歲

2.案發(fā)時(shí)，有人聽到被害者求救。受害人受了刀傷，流血過多而死。

3.警方已經(jīng)懸賞五萬元，以獲取重要線索。

4.如果你有任何信息，請撥打110和警方聯(lián)系。

Answer 1

【答案】Last night, a murder took place between eleven and twelve on Renmin Road. A driver was murdered. He was in his forties. At the time of the crime, someone heard him shouting for help.

The victim was attacked with a knife and bled to death as a result. So far, the police have offered a reward of 50,000 yuan for important clues. If you have any information, please call/ contact the police on 110.

【解析】本文屬于材料作文，描述一起謀殺案件。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如take place, at the time of, victim, as a result, so far, clue以及contact。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。