Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。(本小題共20分)

如火如荼的英語(yǔ)課堂改革正在進(jìn)行著，我們學(xué)校也在積極推進(jìn)以小組為基本單位的合作學(xué)習(xí)方式，老師授課的方式在發(fā)生改變，就連教室里桌子椅子的擺放也在發(fā)生改變，以小組為單位擺在一起，面對(duì)面坐,進(jìn)行小組合作活動(dòng)。有些人喜歡這種方式，有些人人不喜歡，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己實(shí)際寫一篇短文，要求80字左右，內(nèi)容包含以下所給提示，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)信息,開頭已給出。

Some students’ opinions	provide students with easier ways to study and more chances to discuss, more active class
Other students’ opinions	be not used to this new classroom arrangement(安排) can’t pay more attention to the teachers in class
My opinion	……

Nowadays our classroom has changed. The desks are no longer in rows, but pushed together to make bigger desks. The students in the same group sit together.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays our classroom has changed. The desks are no longer in rows, but pushed together to make bigger desks. The students in the same group sit together.

Some students like the new classroom arrangement. It provides students with easier ways to study and more chances to discuss. And the class is more active than before. But other students don’t like it. They aren’t used to it. At the same time they can’t pay more attention to the teachers and always look at classmates.

As for me, I like the way we sit. Students come up with their own ideas and can learn more through discussion. It’s a better way to study. What’s more, it can improve students’ abilities to study by themselves and work in groups.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容以及寫作要求可知，寫作中要注意不同觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)，同時(shí)注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問(wèn)題，注意適當(dāng)使用過(guò)渡詞，保持上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上大多使用簡(jiǎn)單句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰、自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：provides sb with sth、be used to、at the same time、pay attention to、come up with、What’s more等，以及動(dòng)詞不定式的使用，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，掌握一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。