Question

你是學(xué)校英文報(bào)的小記者李華，上周你們學(xué)校剛舉辦完“英語(yǔ)話(huà)劇節(jié)”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，報(bào)道藝術(shù)節(jié)的情況，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê透邢搿?br />

English Opera Festival
時(shí)間	12月31日
地點(diǎn)	學(xué)校體育館
參加對(duì)象	全體初三學(xué)生和老師
目的	培養(yǎng)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的興趣；展示同學(xué)們的才能；加強(qiáng)班級(jí)之間的交流。
內(nèi)容	國(guó)外著名戲劇，如：The Phantom of the Opera, cinderella等
同學(xué)們的評(píng)價(jià)	表演非常精彩；演出服裝很漂亮；音樂(lè)很感人、動(dòng)聽(tīng)；英語(yǔ)發(fā)音非常準(zhǔn)確。
你的看法	？

（可用詞語(yǔ)：costume 演出服裝）
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80左右
不得透露學(xué)校，姓名任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
English Opera Festival
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Reported by Li Hua

Answer 1

English Opera Festival
Last week, the English Opera Festival has been held in our school. It was on December 31^st. All the teachers and the students attended it at the school gym. The purpose of this festival is to improve the interest of learning English，show the talents of the students’ and strengthen the communication between the classes. At the festival, the students performed the famous foreign opera, such as The Phantom of the Opera, Cinderella and so on. The performance is very wonderful and the costume is beautiful. The music was very moving and the pronunciation was very perfect. I think the festival is a success. And it is good for our students to learn English well.

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們介紹一下學(xué)校英語(yǔ)話(huà)劇節(jié)的情況，有關(guān)于這個(gè)話(huà)劇節(jié)具體的內(nèi)容，時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容、目的等。我們需要把這項(xiàng)事項(xiàng)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。其中還要包括自己對(duì)這個(gè)話(huà)劇節(jié)的評(píng)價(jià)。故這篇短文的結(jié)構(gòu)還是比較簡(jiǎn)單的，難點(diǎn)就是我們要把這些內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確的用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且行文連貫，表達(dá)流暢。同時(shí)還要注意文章中使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)合使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文較好的完成了書(shū)面表達(dá)的任務(wù)。首先文章層次清楚，內(nèi)容詳細(xì)。文章中包括了表格中給出的所有要點(diǎn)，并且表達(dá)層次清楚，不累贅。用兩句話(huà)點(diǎn)明了話(huà)劇節(jié)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及參加對(duì)象，簡(jiǎn)單明了。其次文章的主次分明，像這次話(huà)劇節(jié)的目的、內(nèi)容及評(píng)價(jià)等應(yīng)該是這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容，所以所占篇幅較大。最后文章中詞匯運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，表達(dá)流暢。文章中較好的句式有he purpose of this festival is to improve the interest of learning English、The music was very moving and the pronunciation was very perfect、I think the festival is a success等。