Question

5．根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信．（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)．請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名．）
假設(shè)你叫李華，是英國(guó)中學(xué)生大衛(wèi)的筆友．你收到了他的來(lái)信，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，回答他的問(wèn)題并就這些問(wèn)題介紹一下你的好友，以及你希望大衛(wèi)能幫助你的朋友做什么．（好友的名字用Daming或Xiao Hong代替）
Dear Li Hua，It was great to hear from you．You said that your friend would come to my school as an exchange student（交換生）．I want to know something about him/her．What does he/she look like？What's he/she like？What is his/her hobby？And I wonder if he/she needs my help．I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                 Yours，
                                                  David．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從四個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：朋友的外貌；朋友的性格；朋友的愛好；希望大衛(wèi)能夠提供的幫助．

重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
1． look pretty看上去很漂亮
2．with long dark hair留著黑色的長(zhǎng)頭發(fā)
3．recognize her認(rèn)出她來(lái)
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．Because she has never been to the UK，could you please meet her at the airport？
因?yàn)樗龔膩?lái)沒(méi)有去過(guò)英國(guó)，請(qǐng)你去機(jī)場(chǎng)接她好嗎？（Could you please …？禮貌地提出請(qǐng)求）
【高分句型】2．You can advise her to join the dance club．你可以建議她加入舞蹈俱樂(lè)部．（advise sb．to do sth．建議某人做某事）

解答 Hi!David，
     I'm glad to get your letter and I'd like to tell you something about my friend．My friend is Xiao Hong．She looks pretty．She's tall and thin with long dark hair．Because she has never been to the UK，could you please meet her at the airport【高分句型】？She will wear a red dress so that you can recognize her（外貌）．She's very kind and easy-going so you will like her as soon as you see her．Besides，you can introduce your friends to her．If she has friends，she won't feel lonely（性格）．As we know，your school has all kinds of interest clubs．Xiao Hong loves dancing so much that she spends lots of time on it．You can advise her to join the dance club（愛好）【高分句型】．
    With the help of you，I hope she will get used to the school life there as soon as possible（需要的幫助）．
                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 解答這種題目時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫． 根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．