Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

要求：請用there be句型描述一下你家里有哪些物品，并描述一下它們的顏色以及它們是屬于家庭中哪位成員的。用60個左右詞。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My home

This is my home. Look， there are lots of things here. There are two black shoes. They are my mother’s. Look at the bed， there are two shirts. They are white and they are my father’s. There are many toys in the boxes. They are white， black， yellow and red. They are my brother’s. He likes playing toys very much. There are two red dresses in the chair. They are my new dresses. They are beautiful.

This is my home. What about yours?

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇話題作文。寫作時應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，按要求使用there be句型，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)： 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如： lots of，look at，like doing等；介紹性語言this is及名詞所有格的恰當(dāng)使用， 使文章的表達(dá)更具邏輯性、更富條理；文章最后以What about yours?結(jié)束，語言靈活多變，值得推廣。