Question

15．對于每個人來說，生命都只有一次．注意安全，就是善待和珍惜生命的一種有效途徑，而在現(xiàn)實生活中，并非人人都具有較高的安全意識．甚至可能你還會否認它的重要性，因為雖然你已造成了許多次疏忽，而災(zāi)難剛好與你擦肩而過．所以請以"如何保證校園安全"為題，寫一篇作文．
提示：
1．團結(jié)同學，和同學和睦相處，不打架；
2．課間不追逐打鬧，不在走廊打球、踢球；
3．養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習慣；
4．不吸煙、不喝酒，不去網(wǎng)吧．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)80詞左右．
2．在文中不能出現(xiàn)本人的真實信息．
How to Be Safe At School
Safetyhasbecomethefocustousall．Howtobesafeatschoolisespeciallyimportanttousstudents．
First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．Besides，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight．Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．
In a word，it's important to remember these for us all．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．
last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的；keep away from sth 遠離…句中"which is harmful to our health"為定語從句，修飾"junk food"．這句話意為：最后但并非最不重要的，我們應(yīng)該注意吃健康的食物，遠離對我們身體有害的垃圾食品．
高分句型二：
In a word，it's important to remember these for us all．
這句話的結(jié)構(gòu)為：it is+形容詞+to do sth 做某事怎么樣；in a word 總而言之；這句話意為：總而言之，對我們來說記住這些很重要．

解答 How to Be Safe At School
Safety has become the focus to us all．How to be safe at school is especially important to us students．（開篇點題）
First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．Besides，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight．Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．【高分句型一】（敘述觀點）
In a word，it's important to remember these for us all．【高分句型二】（總結(jié)全文）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．