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1．提示：假如你叫王平，參加了學(xué)校的"有煩惱向誰說？"的調(diào)查活動（a survey）．
調(diào)查結(jié)果：1、大多數(shù)向同學(xué)、朋友說（理由：年齡相仿，容易交流和理解）
          2、一些向老師、家長說（理由：經(jīng)驗豐富、可以得到幫助）
          3、少數(shù)自己獨立解決（理由：不愿與人交流，難以與人相處）
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Dear Editor，
I am a Grade 9 student．Recently we have made a survey----"To whom do you go when in trouble？"Here are the results．
                                                                        
Yours Sincerely，
Wang Ping．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：They hate to talk with others and can"t get on well with other people，either．他們討厭和別人交談，也不能和其他人相處得很好．hate（討厭，不喜歡），常用于hate to do sth．討厭做某事；get on （along） well with sb．與某人相處很好，本句是否定，故后面的"也"用either．
高分句型二：I think we"d better ask our teachers，parents，classmates，and friends for help when we are in trouble．我認(rèn)為我們有困難時，最好向老師、父母、同學(xué)和朋友尋求幫助．we"d better do sth．最好做某事；ask sb．for help尋求某人的幫助；when當(dāng)…的時候，引導(dǎo)時間、條件等狀語從句時，用一般現(xiàn)在時表示將來時；be in trouble處于麻煩困境時．

解答 Dear Editor，
     I am a Grade 9 student．Recently we have made a survey-"To whom do you go when in trouble？"Here are the results．
     Most students will go to their classmates or friends when they have trouble because they are almost the same age．They can talk with and understand each other easily．【大多數(shù)向同學(xué)、朋友說及原因】Some will tell their teachers or parents about their problems as they have rich experience and they are helpful．【一些向老師、家長說及原因】Only a few solve their problems by themselves．They hate to talk with others and can"t get on well with other people，either．（高分句型一：hate討厭，不喜歡，常用于hate to do sth．討厭做某事；get on/along well with sb．與某人相處很好，本句是否定，故后面的"也"用either．） They have few friends．【少數(shù)自己獨立解決及原因】
     I think we"d better ask our teachers，parents，classmates，and friends for help when we are in trouble．（高分句型二：we"d better do sth．最好做某事；ask sb．for help尋求某人的幫助；when當(dāng)…的時候，引導(dǎo)時間、條件等狀語從句時，用一般現(xiàn)在時表示將來時；be in trouble處于麻煩困境時．）（提出建議，表達(dá)自己的觀點）
                                                                                                                                  Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                  Wang Ping

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