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【題目】書面表達

初中的生活美好而短暫。臨近中考，壓力驟增，父母的嘮叨，老師的殷殷期望，自己的學(xué)業(yè)與夢想……傾訴是一副良方。請給七月的你寫一封信，談?wù)勀闵磉叴嬖诘膯栴}，你打算如何解決，鼓勵自己生活還有詩和遠方。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封給自己的信。

要求：1．表達清楚，語法正確，語句通順，上下文連貫；

2．必須包括思維導(dǎo)圖中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當發(fā)揮；

3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

Dear Future Me,

It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that …

Your sincerely

Answer 1

【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two aspects.First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.

In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and communicating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲觀的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.

【解析】

本文寫給未來的自己，目的在于傾訴壓力，尋求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every day.用First, Second點出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法，應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。