Question

根據(jù)下面的要點提示，寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文，可適當發(fā)揮。要點如下：
Sandy 是一個美國女孩。她擅長體育，他喜歡游泳，但排球是她最喜歡的運動。她是學校排球隊的優(yōu)秀隊員，在空閑時間她總是與她的同學一起在操場上打排球。她父母都是學校的體育老師，她們一家人經(jīng)常談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)體育方面的事情。他們都喜歡運動。
參考詞匯：fine 優(yōu)秀的    American 美國的
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Answer 1

Sandy is an American girl. She is good at sports. She also likes swimming, but volleyball is her favorite sport. She is fine member of the volleyball team of their school. And she always plays volleyball with her classmates on the playground in her spare time. Every time they enjoy themselves. Both of her parents are PE teachers in the school. Their family often talks about the things about sports. They all enjoy sports.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要求按照所給的內(nèi)容提示完成這篇作文，我們要用簡單準確的英語句子把內(nèi)容準確地表達出來。寫作中要包含Sandy的主要愛好、對排球的熱愛和主要的活動，進一步介紹她的父母的基本信息等，可針對提示進行適當發(fā)揮，但不可偏多。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第三人稱。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文簡明、扼要地介紹了Sandy的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部提示信息。其中使用的句式和短語都很準確恰當，.如: She is good at sports.她擅長體育和And she always plays volleyball with her classmates on the playground in her spare time. 在空閑時間她總是與她的同學一起在操場上打排球，以及連詞和代詞的準確運用等，如, Both of her parents are PE teachers in the school.,使文章的表達很有邏輯性,更富有條理。